Showing posts with label Week 5. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 5. Show all posts

Saturday, February 16, 2019

Week 5 Story: Sibling Rivalry

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Osiris was a great and wise king. He was rich in wealth and treasure so much so that he had followers and family members alike that wished him ill. One person in particular that disliked him was his little brother Set. Osiris was the reason for a lot of unrest in Set. His brother was jealous of his fortune. His brother wanted his throne. His brother wanted his fame and recognition. There was not much in Osiris' life that Set did not feel overshadowed by. Set's jealousy towards Osiris was consistent with that of being the younger child--an experience rooted in having to see his sibling as older, bigger, and better than him. Set, however, did not let that fuel for anger blind him. He bided his time patiently and looked for opportunities to undo the mighty Osiris.

Osiris one day had returned from a successful raid, full of pride and joy. Osiris' happiness and success meant unhappiness and complacency on Set's part. So naturally, Set recognized this and wanted to knock his brother down a peg. As was the usual custom, Osiris had a city-wide party arranged for his welcome. Set, up to his usual antics, decided to put on a magic show. His show revolved around a disappearing act that would result in Osiris being trapped in the contraption. He could play it off as an accident, and although people would mourn for Osiris for a while, Set would be the one in power.  Little did he know, Osiris had his own plan set in stone. He knew what kinds of things his brother was capable of and how his envy drove his personality. For this reason, Osiris decided to go along with Set's plan--but instead of actually being trapped in the instrument and being impaled by its hidden blade, he developed his own plan to fake his death. Osiris was able to get a mannequin made specifically to his body, including all the features he possessed. When it came time for the disappearing act, Osiris came forward on stage and did everything Set had planned, while also pretending as if he had no idea what Set was up to. After Osiris stepped foot into the instrument that Set had planned to kill him with, Set closed the instrument and began waving his hands to keep the audience engaged. While in the box, Osiris only had about 20 seconds to quickly open the secret compartment in which he had hidden the mannequin in and switch spots with it. He was successful in doing so. He clicked the secret compartment shut as soon as Set opened the actual compartment to show the mannequin stuck inside the contraption with the blade that impaled it. The audience immediately gasped, then began shouting, running around, and crying profusely for their beloved king, as they believed that Osiris had been killed in a magic show accident. Set tried to control his happiness and put on a grave face until he was able to get out of sight behind stage and jump for joy. He thought he had successfully killed his brother and that all the fame, gifts, and praise that was once Osiris's would now be his. 

It had been a few months since the magic show incident, and Set was now in power. The people were still grieving for their lost king, with no idea that he had actually escaped his brother's devious plan. Set had just finished dining with his fellow knights, and as he walked back to his chambers, he felt as if he were being followed. He quickly ran to his door and pulled out his sword as soon as he was able to get inside his room and turn around. H couldn't see the attacker until they sparred for a few minutes and the attacker was forced to step into the light. As the shadow across his face slowly disappeared, Set was able to distinguish his features. 

Set gasped. "It can't be..." he stated, in shock.

"Hey little brother. Miss me?"

Author's Note: I kept the basis of the original story, which was the backstory about Osiris the King and how Set envied his brother. In the original story, however, Set brought forth a beautiful chest and claimed that he would give it to the person that fit in the chest perfectly, knowing that the chest was only made to Osiris's body. Many people tried to fit in it but to no avail. Finally, Osiris stepped forward and laid in the chest, fitting perfectly, as Set intended. Before Osiris could get up, Set's followers closed the lid, nailed it, and smothered it with lead to kill him. The beautiful chest now became Osiris's coffin, while the joyful town soon became overwhelmed by sorrow and Set's tyranny. In my story, I decided to add a plot twist. I like the idea of one character thinking he got the best of the other, then realizing he was outsmarted. So, I had both brothers develop their own plans against each other, which resulted in Osiris getting the best of his evil brother Set.

A beautiful ornate Egyptian chest. Source

Bibliography: Donald Mackenzie, Egyptian Myth and Legend, Source

Thursday, February 14, 2019

Reading Notes: The Tale of King Rhampsinitus

Notes
-There was a wealthy king
-He wanted an impenetrable chamber for all his riches
-One of the builders created a weak spot so that someone could enter undetected
-The same builder had two sons who he told the secret weak spot to as he was dying
-After the builder died, his sons went forth to find the secret way in and steal as much of the king's treasure as possible
-The king saw this and decided to set up traps in the chamber of riches
-Time and again the brothers came and stole more riches

-One time in particular, one of the brothers entered and got caught in a trap and wouldn't make it out.
-He instructed his brother who was waiting outside to come in and behead him and leave his body, as to keep his identity a secret from the frustrated yet intrigued king who would find his body in his chamber of riches
-Saddened, the unrestrained brother complied and left just as he came...with his brother's head under his arm

-The king the next morning marveled at what he saw, and the ingenuity of these treasure theives
-He ordered that the headless body be presented in the town square to see if anyone would come to mourn the individual, ultimately allowing him to ID who it was
-The two sons' mother was deeply in mourning
The mother had the son who survived go and find a way to get the body down of her other son

-The living son went to do as he was demanded, but found two guards standing watch
-He had a wagon full of wine with him
-He opened the wineskins, leaving them to spill and spill in front of the guards
-Acting distraught and genuinely shocked, the guards took advantage of the opportunity to drink to their heart's content.
-The son decided to cut his losses and share with the guards as much as they wanted
-The guards fell asleep due to their drunkeness
-The son was able to retrieve his brother's body and return it to his mother

-The angry king was still intrigued by these cunning robber(s)
-The king decided to offer a pardon and a great reward to the man who had so successfully eluded him time after time.
-The son set forth to appear before the king in his palace, and give account of his actions
-The king was impressed by his ingenuity
-The king then offered him the great reward of taking his daughter's hand in marriage


Head in a treasure chest. Source
   
Bibliography
Donald Mackenzie, Egyptian Myth and Legend, Source

Wednesday, February 13, 2019

Reading Notes: The Death of Osiris

Notes
-Osiris returned from his mission, there was much rejoicing in the land
-There was a royal feast
-Set, Osiris' brother came along with his conspirators
-Set brought an ornate chest that was made in the shape of Osiris' body
-The people of Osiris were at the feast were captivated by it
-Set announced that it would be gifted whoever fit its proportions
-None of the people thought there was any foul play

-People got into the chest one after another, but to no avail--no one fit
-Osiris finally came forward and laid down to realize his body perfectly
-Quickly Set's minions sprang forward to shut the lid and nail the chest closed
-The orate chest now had become the coffin of Osiris, as he breathed his last breath
-People were confused and merrymaking had been replaced by sorrow
-Set told his followers to throw the chest into the Nile in the dark night
-The current of the Nile took it all the way to the great ocean
-Set ascended the throne of Egypt
-Tyranny prevailed as Set was an unfair and vengeful ruler


A depiction of Osiris. Source


Bibliography
Donald Mackenzie, Egyptian Myth and Legend, Source